Songs of Eretz Poetry Review is pleased to present
“Intrusion” by Carolyn Martin, Poet of the Week. A brief biography of the poet may be found here: http://eretzsongs.blogspot.com/2014/12/the-songs-of-eretz-poet-of-week-for.html.
Intrusion
Scrawled
across receipts and banking slips:
We tease about the view … A leap, a twist …
The darkness
slides … With shouts of birds … And tilts
of taste …
Red amaryllis startles me ….
This agile
arrogance of words! To think
they own my
time and focus me away
from bills
and politics; from quakes and wars
and mindless
chores that order formless days.
These snips
delay a morning run, a sip
through
evergreens. Demand a page and vie
to be
arranged and rearranged as if,
like juried
paintings in a gallery,
they merit
perfect pace and slants of light.
This
unrelenting insolence of phrase
scavenges
free verse refusing to stay
free. Tracks
risky resonance. Claims voice – bold,
tenacious,
strange. Untilt the bird, it tones.
Tease
flowers through a darkened land. Then leap,
twist,
slide. Find compass in the words at hand.
Poet’s
Notes: Like many
writers, I’ve learned if I don’t immediately jot down a word or phrase that’s
popped into my head, I’ll lose them within the next few minutes. Hence, I’ve
grabbed anything near at hand to save them – whether it’s a Safeway grocery
receipt or the back of an envelope. The accumulation of snippets of poetry on
all sizes and shapes of paper was the springboard for this poem. That led me to
pursue the notion that the poet can become so consumed and distracted by words
and images that everyday demands are often put on hold.
Editor’s
Note: Martin’s modern
approach to the quatrain is refreshing, worthy of Wordsworth yet new, with a
verse form that sings like rhymed iambic pentameter while remaining
blank. I am reminded also of Emily Dickinson--by the form of the quatrains as well as by the theme of writing snippets of poetry on scraps, something for which Dickinson was known (several scraps are above pictured).
I also appreciate Martin's satirical and perhaps counterintuitive take
on the life of a poet. Most poets complain about how the quotidian
aspects of life intrude upon their writing time. This poet maintains the opposite--an interesting
twist. “Intrusion” was first published in Verseweavers (2011).
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