Songs of Eretz Poetry Review is pleased to present
“Intrusion” by Carolyn Martin, Poet of the Week. A brief biography of the poet may be found here: http://eretzsongs.blogspot.com/2014/12/the-songs-of-eretz-poet-of-week-for.html.
Intrusion
Scrawled
across receipts and banking slips:
We tease about the view … A leap, a twist …
The darkness
slides … With shouts of birds … And tilts
of taste …
Red amaryllis startles me ….
This agile
arrogance of words! To think
they own my
time and focus me away
from bills
and politics; from quakes and wars
and mindless
chores that order formless days.
These snips
delay a morning run, a sip
through
evergreens. Demand a page and vie
to be
arranged and rearranged as if,
like juried
paintings in a gallery,
they merit
perfect pace and slants of light.
This
unrelenting insolence of phrase
scavenges
free verse refusing to stay
free. Tracks
risky resonance. Claims voice – bold,
tenacious,
strange. Untilt the bird, it tones.
Tease
flowers through a darkened land. Then leap,
twist,
slide. Find compass in the words at hand.

Editor’s
Note: Martin’s modern
approach to the quatrain is refreshing, worthy of Wordsworth yet new, with a
verse form that sings like rhymed iambic pentameter while remaining
blank. I am reminded also of Emily Dickinson--by the form of the quatrains as well as by the theme of writing snippets of poetry on scraps, something for which Dickinson was known (several scraps are above pictured).
I also appreciate Martin's satirical and perhaps counterintuitive take
on the life of a poet. Most poets complain about how the quotidian
aspects of life intrude upon their writing time. This poet maintains the opposite--an interesting
twist. “Intrusion” was first published in Verseweavers (2011).
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