Songs of Eretz Poetry Review is pleased to present “All In” by Sarah
Hebert, a music teacher.
All In
Sarah Hebert
Something small and rarely
spoken.
Seemingly lost, yet solely
sought,
A lust still growing and
never broken.
A tempting proposal made
painfully clear,
To take said risk, or
forever be sable.
Which path to travel for someone
dear,
Like dice thrown costly upon
a table.
To choose a choice can
change ones chance,
But decisions can wither
when mixed with age.
They must be made from more
than a glance,
While adding in luck for the
perfect wage.
Poet's Notes: I wrote "All In"
when I was around sixteen years old, an exercise that helped me identify the
origins of the emotions and feelings that I was experiencing at the time.
Editor’s Note: I like the tight quatrains
here as well as the use of alliteration. There is a nice dose of wisdom
here, too.
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