Songs of Eretz Poetry Review is pleased to present “Bacchus” by Efren L.
Cruzada. Mr. Cruzada’s work has
appeared in The West 4th Street Review
and Headless. He studied at New York
University and currently resides in Queens, New York.
Efren L. Cruzada
I worship your indulgent
nature
Bacchus, higher than all the
divines
I am drunken, always drunken
Intoxicated on the spirit
and the flesh
Anaximenes’ air that holds
the soul
To the body, the earth
breathing
Its own spirit held to the
planet by air
A material firmament,
tactile
Sphere spinning in the void
Orbiting an immortal ellipse
Planet revolving with the
passions
Intoxicated on the spirit
and the flesh
The world is drunken, always
drunken
The seas are churning with
hangovers
Rippling their raucous pain
like man
The sorrowful waves on the
crust
Sadness and pleasure and
lust revolving
With these vibrating
passions
Man breathes in this briny
air and foam
Exerts its dominion over the
earth
Drunk on grass and salt and
blood
Drunk on wine and food and
knowledge
Love and logic and beauty,
all ecstasies
To their highest, most
supreme limit
I am drunken, always drunken
I worship your indulgent
nature
Bacchus, higher than all the
divines
Intoxicated on the spirit
and the flesh
Poet’s Notes: Sitting down and having a
crack at the monumental The History of Western Philosophy by Bertrand
Russell, I swooned at his glorious passages on the Greeks. All I could think of
was their endless intoxication. They were intoxicated on wine, on food, on
arts, on intellect, on spirituality. Their excess was what catapulted them to
become the most glorious society in the history of western civilization. They
were able to live paradoxically and thrive, like the mathematician Pythagoras,
who was also a mystic who formed his own religion.
The Greeks thought highly of
Dionysus, the god of wine and pleasure, and they perceived him as one of their
most important gods. I connected highly with this indulgence in the sensual and
the spiritual, for I too always feel drunk both spiritually and sensually. I am
intellectually obsessed, spiritually obsessed, sensually obsessed, attempting
to awaken my being through every avenue possible. In this way, I view myself as
a mystic. Poetry is the medium through which I reach the greatest heights of my
soul. Poetry is the euphoria through which I attempt to awaken my inner
limitlessness.
I used the Roman iteration of
the god, Bacchus, because I felt the word had a rougher feel to it than the
word Dionysus. Bacchus sounds darker and edgier to me while Dionysus sounds
soft and frivolous. This choice was purely for aesthetic purposes. Anaximenes
was a philosopher who believed that the earth breathed like an organism and the
element air held the soul to the body.
Editor’s Note: There is something wild
about this one that I really like. Reminded me a bit of Whitman, only
with shorter lines.
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