Songs of
Eretz Poetry Review is pleased to present “Commander-In-Chief” by Dusty Wallace. Mr. Wallace lives in the
Appalachians of Virginia with his wife and two sons. You can find more of his
poetry in Star*Line Issue 36.4 and on MysticNebula.com.
Commander-In-Chief
Dusty Wallace
Watched them
with the Hubble’s
eye,
a secret mission
accomplished.
Feared them,
and their swift
fleet,
began to form a
strategy.
Found me,
they came quietly,
woke me from a
restless sleep.
Told me
they were from the
stars,
some place beyond
the heliopause.
Showed me
on an ancient
chart,
a familiar dot of
green and blue.
Touched me
on the forehead,
sharing years of
memories.
Helped me
discern my role,
not invaded but
invader.
Begged me
to call it off,
the interplanetary
barrage.
Warned me
of swift reprisal,
should I pursue
aggression.
Left me
under my covers,
sweating, cold and
damp.
Poet’s Notes: Forms are fun, even when
non-traditional. “Commander-In-Chief” was the result of building my own
template to play with. Aliens are too often the bad guys in science fiction.
The fictional government's response is always to shoot first and study later. I
thought it'd be nice if the aliens got a chance to be diplomatic for once.
Editor’s Note: I especially enjoy the
relentless two syllable openings of each stanza. The "not invaded
but invader" blows my mind (in a good way). “Commander-In-Chief”
first appeared in Songs of Eretz Poetry
E-zine in February 2014.
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