Songs of Eretz Poetry Review is pleased to present “Birds on a Wire” by John C. Mannone, a Songs of Eretz Frequent
Contributor and this week’s Poet of the Week. The poet’s biography may be found in the “About Our Editor
& Frequent Contributors” section.
Birds on a Wire
John C. Mannone
with writer’s block
gazes outside
as sparrows line up
on power lines,
their silhouettes
perch as musical notes
on a three-wire bar
hung from cross-staffs.
He scribbles their
arrangement on paper:
ink nesting in circles
before his hands
swoop down,
fingers resting light
as feathers on ivory,
ruffling out
the bird-inspired tune:
itself a songbird
lifting to the heavens—
a psalm of praise and thanks,
taking wing.
Poet’s Notes: “Birds on a Wire” is a product of a prompt
involving a list of ten words and categories obtained from a monthly open mic I
attend in Chattanooga: a musical term, a part of a bird, rake, balloon,
shuttle, ridge, rile, mash, repulse, scribble. (Only three of these
survived the final revision.)
The conflation of the first
two items is what led to the poem because they triggered a memory of TV
commercial I had seen years earlier—a pianist suffering from “writer’s block”
gazed out his studio window and saw birds “scale” the three-phase power lines.
Their arrangement gave him the opening chords for a piano rift. Eventually, the
poem’s structure emulates a 3-bar structure.
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