We Are Still Alone
James Frederick William Rowe
Seeing but dust and
rust
Sand and stone
A-crumble with the
withering years
Of erosion wrought of
time and folly
Sparked cataclysm
Ruining all that
remains
Of life once abundant
Now dead to the last
It is cruel to visit
this place
So long after life
To recognize in broken
stalks
In half-collapsed
mounds
And the scattered
remains
Of dust-coated
artifacts
Inscribed with
voiceless words
The proof of ancient
habitation
The mark of age-old
deeds
To search for so long
In hopes of finding
life
Another civilization,
another community
To find its proof only
Millennia after it has
perished
This is a joke
And the cold,
mirthless laughter
Echoes in the wastes
And rings in my soul
I shall take the
desolation as my God
And heap with unhewn
stones
An altar of solitude
To be crowned with an
offering
Of a golden disk
carried since antiquity
By all voyagers
A token of friendship,
of brotherhood
Now become a
supplication to extinction
Lord over all I see
When I return to my
ship
I will make no record
of this place
I shall bear the
miserable knowledge
Of this broken world
As lonesomely as the
world itself
No one shall be
burdened but I
With the knowledge of
this desolation
Of the shattered hope
of fraternity
Made false in death
Poet’s Notes: A few weeks ago, I was
feeling fairly somber and I was reading the 1989 Thor annual. In the
backup feature of the comic, Thor visits a ruined earth some thousand years in
the future as the only living creature present except the silent, God-like Uatu
the Watcher. I was struck with the horrible misery of this moving story and was
inspired to write a poem on a similar theme.
Instead of Earth, this poem
takes place on some unnamed planet. The narrator, a space explorer, comes to
explore a planet that had once hosted a civilization. Mankind has apparently
had no contact with sapient alien life at this time, and in a cruel turn of
fate the explorer finds proof of an alien civilization only after it had long
ago passed away by some (self-caused?) cataclysm. Made miserable by the sight
of the devastation, the man mourns the death of the planet through erecting an
"altar of solitude" and placing his golden disk "carried from
antiquity / by all voyagers" (a play on the Voyager spacecraft) as
an offering to the "deity" of extinction.
The poem is also partially
inspired by the Fermi Paradox, which hypothesizes that any sapient life of
sufficient sophistication might well end up destroying itself, leading to a
high likelihood that we will never meet another civilization.
I didn't need to work too hard
on this poem. I wrote most of it in one sitting, returning only to give its
ending at a later date. Structurally, the stanzas of nine verses each were
hardly in need of a touch up. Here and there I added and subtracted, reworking
wording and such, but it was an easy poem to compose, and one with I am happy.
Though I wrote it in a somber mood, and it has its genesis in that mindset, my
normal thoughts on such things are gloomy enough as is that I do not think the
inspiration was solely due to a melancholic spell on my part, but rather simply
enhanced by it.
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