By Cherry Green Ensorcelled
James Frederick William Rowe
Cherry Green
What colour do you
think of
When I say those
words?
Whatever it is
You're wrong
The phrase is meaningless
The colour imaginary
But I have made you
Envision it
nevertheless
An incantation of an
image
By the power of my
words
Was it bright?
Was it dull?
Green?
Red?
Mine is bright like
limes
Green as a traffic
light
A-glow for go
In a rain-washed night
Green as candy is
green
So is the caster
Victim of the spell
Captured, too
By the words he writes
And the images they
conjure
Poet’s Notes: Before
reading these notes, do please take a moment to fix in your mind the colour you
experienced when reading the poem. Part of the fun of this poem is having your
own conception of what "cherry green" means.
The phrase "cherry
green" came to me out of the blue (ha!) about a month ago. I believe I was
sitting down to have breakfast when it just popped into my mind. What does it
mean for green to be cherry? Cherry is a shade of red! And yet, in spite of
this, I could not help but picture a colour, even if the phrase is meaningless
and conflicts (as a philosopher I shall not say "contradicts") with
itself.
Before writing the poem, I
actually queried several people to ask them what they imagined cherry green to
be, struck by how odd it was that a phrase which described a completely
arbitrary and made up colour term could nevertheless evoke a picture. Some
thought it was green, others red, some bright, others dull—really, I got a wide
gamut of answers, though there seemed to have been a slight preference for
green over red, and one such answer that it was an artificial green as one
would see in candy, helped me in the poem itself ("green as candy is
green"). Again, in spite of it being a meaningless phrase, we nevertheless
are moved to imagine something to go alongside it. This magical (and I do mean
magical) quality—the ability of words to ignite the imagination even without
inherent meaning—thus became a major theme in the poem where I (the
narrator/poet) am both the one who harnesses this power for my own purposes (by
writing the poem and making everyone experience the colour), and also its
victim (as I too am subject to the same power).
Aesthetically, this poem was
pretty easy to write. After deciding I'd make a poem out of this, I penned it
pretty simply on the subway. I altered it only for structural purposes, making
"cherry" a single-verse stanza, and making the short questions in the
middle their own stanza of four verses. The main stanzas are ten a piece, and I
had only to alter them slightly to achieve this balance.
As for the title, I struggled
a bit here, but as I recently became enamoured with the word
"ensorcelled" after reading it in an old comic book (a freelance
comic editor has to know his craft...plus they're fun to read), and it suited
the "magic" at play in this poem, I resolved my dilemma by
incorporating it into the title. "Cherry Green" could've stood as the
title of the poem itself, or simply "Ensorcelled", but by combining
the two I think I underscore that theme of the power of words. Plus, I just
like the title.
Editor’s Note: The “colorful” spelling
of “colour” is an affectation of the poet. Also, I decided not to have a graphic accompany this post, as doing so might bias the reader and ruin the fun that would otherwise occur when reading this poem. For what it is worth, I almost immediately thought of those horrible green cherries that are found in traditional fruitcake.
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