Flatland: Variations on a Ballad
Steven Wittenberg Gordon
II
dressed in winter snow,
I stand on you and feel your wind.
My eagle’s scream echoes
through the icy air
that surrounds your craggy peaks.
I am a wolf-were
though with an eagle’s beak.
With grizzly bear arms I hug you.
Roots spring out of my feet.
My blood flows deep and swiftly through
my body, warming it.
But I dream.
I dwell upon a plain--
A plain plane--
A vast flat bed of blades
stabs at my soul.
My spirit fades.
Poet's Notes: Compared to Part I, Part II trades hard end-line rhymes for consonance. Still a ballad, but just a bit less traditional, more modern.
Poet's Notes: Compared to Part I, Part II trades hard end-line rhymes for consonance. Still a ballad, but just a bit less traditional, more modern.
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