Today's offering from Terri is "The Nature of Love". It was a finalist in the 2017 Songs of Eretz Poetry Award Contest.
The Nature of Love
Terri Lynn Cummings
and clouds melt
like butter
into slow sheets
teasing forth the
need for more
The press of dew
arrays this moment
a slip of a thing
in tousled fields
a vivid chorus of
breath
a shiver of
moisture
Strength and
subtlety
balance intimately
tip the tumble of
wonder
from the ripe
scent of living
Wild strokes of
red
flare from a
thousand candles
shatter the weight
of silk
as the hour blooms
Seasons rest
on yesterday’s
pillow
tremble in renewal
as a clear spring
Deepening grace
opens an unguarded
sky
like petals of a
flower
unique in
this world
Poet’s Notes: When I write about a deeply personal
subject such as this one, I use the pen of nature. If my window is closed, I
read Mary Oliver’s poems for inspiration. Short lines, minimal words, and the
wide, white page leave space for rumination, imagination, precision. What joy
to strike the match, which lights a candle.
Editor’s Notes: The imagery in this magical
poem is simply breathtaking, tastefully erotic whether taken literally or metaphorically. I especially enjoy the way the rhythm is varied;
yet the words still flow. Contest
Judge Former Kansas Poet Laureate Caryn Mirriam-Goldberg, PhD had this to say
about the poem:
“....the
ripe scent of living” really speaks volumes as well as the “Wild strokes of
red/flare from a thousand candles....” There's a lot of memorable images in the
specifics here, such as “a slip of a thing in tousled fields/ a vivid chorus of
breath,” which evokes a sense of new life and possibilities.
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