Lauren McBride
soaking drenching downpour
dripping
children dancing splashing
slipping
laughing playing creekside
wading
leafy boatlets floating
fading
water rushing pooling
gushing
gurgles burbles voices
hushing
mindful magic moment keeping
evening nighttime
bedtime sleepingPoet's Notes: I first learned of the empat perkataan form from an article by Shelly Bryant in August 2016 print edition of Scifaikuest. I have chosen to follow the aabbcc rhyme scheme. I hope to evoke an image of children playing in a creek on a rainy day, perhaps where the water pools, perhaps where it rushes, watching leaf boats fade from view and in the end falling silent just to listen to the music of the water. My brothers and I spent hours playing in the creek behind our house when we were little. Those memories still bring a smile.
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