hush . . .
multi-legged musicians
begin their
nocturne
--Lauren McBride
Poet's Notes: I have always loved dusk when the
hustle and bustle of day yields to the stillness of night, especially if
sitting outside on a porch, perhaps by myself with a good book, perhaps with
others, or that one special person. When twilight fades to star shine, frogs
might begin to announce themselves, joined by a cricket or two, or the only
sound might be the soft hum of insects in the distance. With a haiku, most of
that has to be imagined.
I chose
"nocturne" to represent nature's symphony because it is by definition
a musical composition suggestive of night. Also, it worked with my syllable
count, an inescapable requirement of 5-7-5 haiku.
Also for the
syllable count, I added "hush" to the second line, and then decided
that I liked it because it could be interpreted two ways: the natural hush of
night falling or someone hushing others to listen.
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