Blind Date
John C. Mannone
Baltimore 1967
At a mixer in an all-girls college up the road
from where I went, I met a beautiful coed:
short sassy blond
hair, brown eyes,
athletic, feminine.
We danced to a live band most the night under stars
glinting off the faceted mirror ball above the dance floor.
That gold colored fixture spun a little faster than a slow
dance, its sexy red lights changing to green then blue,
bathed our faces too.
When I kissed her
goodnight, I knew
I’d want to taste those
supple lips again.
She invited me
to another date.
Funny thing, though, she wanted me to do her
a favor and take her lonely friend to a junior prom.
I wasn’t used to blind dates, especially dress-up
ones, but reluctantly agreed. She was a pretty girl,
a quiet blond, large
hazel eyes, blush rose
cheeks; feminine
in her full-figured gown; nice smile. I suppose
she was as nervous as I. We danced to the band,
talked about our futures. She wanted to be a nurse,
I, a doctor. And of course, we talked about the weather.
When I kissed her
goodnight, I knew
she was too innocent.
She invited me in
to her car for a ride
to the lake or park.
I kissed her again, told her to make out
the details of her dreams until they’re reality.
And I went home to work on mine. I never
saw either one of those two girls again.
Poet's Notes: Relationships are like a dance, sometimes elegant and smooth, sometimes wild and jerky. The structure has long flowing melodic lines as if in a waltz, punctuated by short enjambed lines to a different more jazzy rhythm to echo this.
I had a nostalgic moment thinking about my college days (Loyola College, Baltimore). Much of this “coming-of-age” poem is true, but I took some liberties.
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